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hi im new to this site heres my first poem to be posted here(no real punctuation)
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I was in love once, but once only came once. Reasons are uknown and feelings are unshown For love was in vain as it cut my heart inside Bleeding profoundly as it cried and wondered why Thinking i…
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I really like the poem! There is an energy and readibility that I appreciate.
You mention about lack of punctuation, and there's nothing wrong with that at all, but you need to be consistent.
Your first line is a traditional sentence format for in…
I was in love once, but once only came once.
Reasons are uknown and feelings are unshown
For love was in vain as it cut my heart inside
Bleeding profoundly as it cried and wondered why
Thinking its because of me I know I feel inside
Then I hear…
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